Please learn how to use commas. Pornhat 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-12-19 22:50:00totally unrealistic its just to fake guess what im only 10 lolREADERReport 2006-03-28 18:38:28ok storyREADERReport 2006-03-28 18:37:08good story but needs more relistismREADERReport 2006-03-05 07:13:56This may be your first time writing a porn story, but it looks like it was your first time writing anything ever. Please learn how to use commas. Details are good, but they have to be the right details. Please learn how to use commas. Please learn how to use commas. Peace. =Dreamer=READERReport 2006-03-04 23:38:38complete crap«12» Peace. it was almost painful to read. If your character is rich, but none of his friends know it, don’t have him live in a house with a four-car garage and drive a Lincoln Navigator!
