There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… Xxx video 3 comments«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. 3 comments«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. now write a sequel :)anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 01:01:17teri maa ki saale. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected.
