I give the story a 7 more if he would have described better.READERReport 2006-01-01 21:30:28great story. Pornhat Glad it was special for you both. You forgot “What happened to her hymen?”
Shit story. No ass fuck. If they had been kissing before this weekend and in the park, than why do they act surprised at the chemistry? No sexual description. Glad it was special for you both. No blow job. Glad it was special for you both. Did she orgasm? That’s all you needed to say. You forgot “What happened to her hymen?”
Shit story. No sexual description. Also, you need to break the paragraph each time you add dialogue or change speakers. They went back into the tent, how did they end up on the grass. That’s all you needed to
