Jane’s Jaw-dropping Tryst With Kyle’s Monstrous Cock

7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-03-16 10:45:00DAMN! Try and make it flow a little better and take things slower, teasing and buildup make a story alot better. Sex video Try and make it flow a little better and take things slower, teasing and buildup make a story alot better. But not the worst first attempt I’ve read so don’t feel bad.READERReport 2006-09-05 11:44:32oh my god this was badREADERReport 2006-08-31 08:08:01virgin«12» Dr. But not the worst first attempt I’ve read so don’t feel bad.READERReport 2006-09-05 11:44:32oh my god this was badREADERReport 2006-08-31 08:08:01virgin«12» Give a new writer a break.It was good but could add more detail.ATry again and ignore the critics.They probably don’t write!