It needs directionREADERReport 2007-04-03 14:41:49uhh what the fuck were you writing and why was it under first-time? You really need to get more creative on this story.READERReport 2007-03-29 17:46:35Hey back off its the first time my gf wrote the story so back the fuck off«123» 11 comments«123»READERReport 2008-02-14 21:47:42to:cloud strife I fucked your gf from :the great steel shaft and back her of my dickREADERReport 2007-10-27 12:54:22Just because it’s your girlfriends first story is no excuse not to use spell-check, or proof read before submitting. Xxx video This story is going no-where. It needs directionREADERReport 2007-04-03 14:41:49uhh what the fuck were you writing and why was it under first-time? You really need to get more creative on this story.READERReport 2007-03-29 17:46:35Hey back off its the first time my gf wrote the story so back the fuck off«123»
