lol Great Story though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. lol Great Story though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-11-28 21:24:44Decent story
Pro’s:
Good Storyline
Not a half bad job with describing the sex. Sex video Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» Con’s:
You need more dialoge during the sex because all you mainly did was describe it, your next story needs to have more dialoge during sex.«12345» 59 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more. . . . . … 59 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-15 22:40:51good story but needs more storylineanonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 03:03:06hmmmmmmmm too bad you didn’t get to fuck her more. . . . . …
