It’s boiled down, and it has an immedeate style. Porn I sympathize with the girl totally. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-28 20:27:27Good story but poor grammar does subtract from the flow in reading… This submission dominates, Traci.READERReport 2005-05-07 19:19:49love this story, it made me cum.«12» This submission dominates, Traci.READERReport 2005-05-07 19:19:49love this story, it made me cum.«12» I really liked it. I sympathize with the girl totally. Also adding more details. Damn she lost her innocents but you gave no details… Also adding more details. I really liked it. I might recommend slowing down while writing and having someone proof read… xoxoxox Tx again, vanessaREADERReport 2006-01-07 13:27:19This is real psychological storytelling. Also adding more details. I’m sure she must have had emotions about it after while alone in her room…READERReport 2006-06-12 21:57:19reading them in order like this
