4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 14:55:50This really sucked. XXX MasterBaterReport 2013-01-18 19:54:14This really sucked and made no sense. To much narative and descriptive actions.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-17 10:15:38Very disjointed. I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. MasterBaterReport 2013-01-18 19:54:14This really sucked and made no sense. I hope your future stories are betteral459Report 2013-01-18 15:20:01The plot is interesting but it was like reading a screenplay. Was not able to finish it.«1» 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 14:55:50This really sucked. It was so disjointed I couldn’t read on. …Mr. 4 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2013-02-06 14:55:50This really sucked. What is up with that? It was so disjointed I couldn’t read on. …Mr. What is up with that?
