10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-01 04:41:58I loved the story. Pornhat a sucuubi is a demonic seductress who seduces men in their dreams then slowly kills them from the inside.anonymous readerReport 2012-03-19 01:05:43the charecter is not a sucuubi (the singular form of sucuubus) nor does she act remotley like one. The only thing I would say, and a lot of others would as well Is check spelling grammar and just other basic things. The only thing I would say, and a lot of others would as well Is check spelling grammar and just other basic things. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-01 04:41:58I loved the story. It doesn’t sound like much but it goes a long way !anonymous readerReport 2012-03-19 01:05:44the charecter is not a sucuubi (the singular form of sucuubus) nor does she act remotley like one.
