Some paragraphs a little lông; some dialogue not clearly marked! Pornhat The scenario & details of action are great. Our cats are not allowed in the office/studio because they’re too rambunctious and they like playing with the art supplies as much as I do.I think the drawings are very good.Anonymous readerReport 2009-07-14 13:47:27got board half way through it, especially when you started talking in the third partyAnonymous readerReport 2009-03-09 02:58:19Hm. The main problem is the “person” speaking or telling the story. 14 comments«123»Dudley DowrongReport 2021-01-20 04:15:46Changing voice/person as you have, is not easy & confusing. 6/10READERReport 2007-08-11 22:53:24If u stole it at least steal something good!!!!!! This is SHIT«123» Some paragraphs a little lông; some dialogue not clearly marked! Some paragraphs a little lông; some dialogue not clearly marked!
