13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! XXX prt 1 was great!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-24 16:18:38Personally I would have liked it more if she had been able to travel back home and get revenge on her sister. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-03 22:01:31The story looks like its unfinished…but good story tho!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-27 11:52:23HEY! Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. jk. Got yourself a proofreader? PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story! Story #2 was just as GOOD as the first. this is a good story«123» The grammar was good and the punctuation was good, too. PLEASE KEEP WRITING, YOUR STORIES ARE GOOD.purbratReport 2010-03-23 02:43:17I enjoyed this story!
