if u worked on your editing a bit more then it would novel-ready! if u worked on your editing a bit more then it would novel-ready! XXX i dont know whether i should give it a positive or negative rating. It was slightly better than the first though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-12-17 19:29:22MAKE A 3RD ONE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!«1234» i dont know whether i should give it a positive or negative rating. Man this story is so good you have got to keep writing.READERReport 2009-07-03 01:30:02amazing talent!! It was slightly better than the first though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-12-17 19:29:22MAKE A 3RD ONE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!«1234» i dont know whether i should give it a positive or negative rating. It was slightly better than the first though.Anonymous readerReport 2008-12-17 19:29:22MAKE A 3RD ONE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!«1234»
