one small critique. XXX 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-14 01:18:28good work. I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. Everything else was great. 🙂
With the effort it takes to add the ‘ it makes it just too deliberate, for me. Might be just me tho!anonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 00:40:03ANOTHER GREAT PART WELL WRITTI=EN AND THE STORY IS SOGOOD KEEP THE SERIES GOING
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