but I think it gets less realistic to the end.. Sex video but yeah.. keep writing.READERReport 2006-07-31 02:40:51The story is alright:) Starts pretty realistic .. A longer story has been wrote tonight so should be on display within a few daysREADERReport 2006-08-03 21:39:59Nice since I am in IRAQ even better then goodREADERReport 2006-07-31 02:55:46good story. and i’m guessing shattered means drunk? if not oh well. Tim what part wasnt realistic, similar experience happened me. I do like hear feedback as it shows me how I can improve my stories. Tim what part wasnt realistic, similar experience happened me. and i’m guessing shattered means drunk? but yeah.. A longer story has been wrote tonight so should be on display within a few daysREADERReport 2006-08-03 21:39:59Nice since I am in IRAQ even better then goodREADERReport 2006-07-31 02:55:46good story.
