The story is not bad, but the grammar errors make it too hard to read and enjoy.””
Seriously? XXX learn to write proper English before you publish crap. The story is not bad, but the grammar errors make it too hard to read and enjoy.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 02:30:50I like this my dick got super hardanonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 02:30:46I like this my dick got super hardAnonymous readerReport 2013-11-03 13:06:28Beautiful, pls keep em comin«12» worst grammar in a long time! learn to write proper English before you publish crap. worst grammar in a long time! IF you don’t like it go find another author to bitch at! worst grammar in a long time!
