9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-05-23 19:22:51WOW! Sex video horrible exicution. Grammar is pretty bad as well.READERReport 2007-12-04 02:57:24what’s with the fucking “bitch” calling thing?«12» One second he is in her ass next her cunt, then her ass. horrible exicution. Need major proof reading. Need major proof reading. He ended up with Melinda. Need major proof reading. Grammar is pretty bad as well.READERReport 2007-12-04 02:57:24what’s with the fucking “bitch” calling thing?«12» Need major proof reading. This story is one the best here on this si…Yeah, I don’t think so.No one doesThis guy is a dumb fuckReport 2008-07-13 16:58:02It was the worse story ever retard, wasn’t long enough didn’t make any sense, what haven’t you had a english class before, you dumb retard!!!!Stop writting stories cause you can’t tell a good story -1/10READERReport 2007-12-14 18:51:57What a surprise..
