Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too. XXX bit impposible, but its fanasy right? But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex. However the story was just a bit weak. …I have to agree with the first poster. . … Grammar? Just a bit shortanonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:47:37I thought it was a good story, and liked everything about the sex.
