Dump those damned exclamation marks! Ponderous.wordytomReport 2008-10-01 18:56:11I am not going to be nice to you. Pornhat The racial stuff might be better handled without the tags like mulatto. In writing the exclamation mark denotes yelling, screaming and the intense emotions accompanying them. You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. You will impress more people with your story telling abilities if you dump the turgid prose of yesteryear and work with colloquila English, American flavored. Instead I she give you my honest thoughts. You have a vivid imagination and a fine grasp of the English language. You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst.
