try again, the story has potential«12» 9 comments«12»READERReport 2008-03-11 23:30:39fuck meREADERReport 2007-02-09 23:02:48that was a pretty good story u guys need to go suck a dick if u dont like how he spelled the shit why dont u writer your own fuckin story oh ya and TDmania can i have some of these girls phone numbers lol good story has lots of potential deff. Porn video try again, the story has potential«12» keep writingREADERReport 2006-11-09 19:15:52good story make part 2 longer and more detail. keep writingREADERReport 2006-11-09 19:15:52good story make part 2 longer and more detail. keep writingREADERReport 2006-11-09 19:15:52good story make part 2 longer and more detail. maybe add a teatcher or somthign liek that or one of them can squirt?READERReport 2006-10-28 23:54:18a couple of spelling errors but a good storyREADERReport 2006-09-19 09:31:23hard to follow, jumping back and
