5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-12-25 17:19:55Decent story, but there are several quite obvious spelling mistakes, the structure of the writing is sloppy and the story doesn’t quite flow as it seems to jump from one bit to another, like you got bored of writing that part and moved on…anyway maybe you should get someone else to read it as it could be a whole lot better if you revised it with someone. Other than that, I really enjoyed it. Sex video Also if she was drugged shouldn’t she be feeling a little drowsy and disorientated, not “oh wow I’m naked and there a man next to me, hey mister!!!”anonymous readerReport 2012-02-11 22:59:41pYxkEG As I have expected, the writer blurted out..!anonymous readerReport 2011-02-21 17:34:48Sloppy.
