Run ouit of ideas?READERReport 2005-02-03 22:07:39good start bad finish
make moreREADERReport 2004-11-25 06:51:19don’t botherREADERReport 2004-11-14 17:15:55Seems to be a good introduction but sadly the story has hardly startedREADERReport 2004-07-27 11:55:43Great story, it just needs a the second part.«12» 9 comments«12»READERReport 2005-03-06 16:09:43An interting opening. XXX But it all went downhill after that. But it all went downhill after that. Run ouit of ideas?READERReport 2005-02-03 22:07:39good start bad finish
make moreREADERReport 2004-11-25 06:51:19don’t botherREADERReport 2004-11-14 17:15:55Seems to be a good introduction but sadly the story has hardly startedREADERReport 2004-07-27 11:55:43Great story, it just needs a the second part.«12» Run ouit of ideas?READERReport 2005-02-03 22:07:39good start bad finish
make moreREADERReport 2004-11-25 06:51:19don’t botherREADERReport 2004-11-14 17:15:55Seems to be a good introduction but sadly the story has hardly startedREADERReport 2004-07-27 11:55:43Great story, it just needs a the second part.«12»
