Just my thoughts. XXX ‘All good things come from hard work and dedication!’ – piercedtwins«1» Keep plugging!!!!! Keep up the great work and let me know when you post another story please,thanks..READERReport 2005-04-06 00:44:12You’ve got the right ideas. More physical contact? Keep plugging!!!!! More physical contact? Perhaps, a bit more suspense… Perhaps, a bit more suspense… My problem was that there was no real development to the story. Perhaps, a bit more suspense… I know that I am addicted to reading, literature of all sorts. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2005-04-13 12:30:16Great Fucking Storie, I loved it I wish I was your boyfriend. Just my thoughts. Just my thoughts. No real beginning middle or end. You have talent, it simply needs to be refined. No real beginning middle or end. You have talent, it simply needs
