Though i did get lost a few times along the way i believe this was to do with the lack of detail and description of there settings. Xxx video If yours was crap I would have moved on and not bothered. I also agree with wordytom… The “D” was pure hoke. i was definatly captured all the way to the end. Right now you are trying to be clever. good effert 9/10wordytomReport 2008-10-26 17:15:47Too gimicky. WordytomvtsReport 2008-10-26 06:29:19great story, more please«1» I write and sell a few stories. i was definatly captured all the way to the end. If yours was crap I would have moved on and not bothered. Right now you are trying to be clever. WordytomvtsReport 2008-10-26 06:29:19great story, more please«1» If yours was crap I would have moved on and not
