10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-09-02 01:03:15Yes, sentence structure needs help. but your run-on sentences and improper punctuation did me in! Pornhat But please continue your story, it sounds promising and intrigunig.:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 :-)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 15:32:18Learn to use tags moron.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-30 06:53:07Really dude with ur sis man. But please continue your story, it sounds promising and intrigunig.:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 :-)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 15:32:18Learn to use tags moron.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-30 06:53:07Really dude with ur sis man. But please continue your story, it sounds promising and intrigunig.:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 :-)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 15:32:18Learn to use tags moron.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-30 06:53:07Really dude with ur sis man. I’m sure you can re-read this, correct your mistakes and re-post it. … But please continue your story, it sounds promising and intrigunig.:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 :-)anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27
