Thanks, too for putting some affection built up over time between Ben and Zac in, too, as it showed their bond growing as they each did what they could to show they cared for the other before making the ultimate effort to get together, rather than the typical sex-right-away model that’s prevalent in most stories on here. Good work and Thank Youanonymous readerReport 2011-03-16 21:11:48Young Author, i was hooked on your stories the moment i started reading, I liked how this was a more unusual style of writing (short sentancing), for me the story worked. Pornhat Thanks, too for putting some affection built up over time between Ben and Zac in, too, as it showed their bond growing as they each did what they could to show they cared for the other
