But it’s a nice try. 10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-28 09:13:31I agree it dose has potenial a lot indeed the locatipn is a bit hard to imagine but keep going my love.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-14 19:26:13i like when he said put your hand in your clit while i fuck u bitchanonymous readerReport 2013-01-31 19:44:21It has potential, though you weren’t very descriptive in your language. Sex video Men can’t have mutiple orgams, like some women are capable of. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”. also, a character description lets people picture your story more vividly. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”.
