All and all ill give it a 4/5. Porn video Bring on part 2!Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-05 10:43:53You HAVE to make a chapter 2. I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad. All and all ill give it a 4/5. Confusing. Bring on part 2!Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-05 10:43:53You HAVE to make a chapter 2. Nice work :DDiViNaTiOnReport 2009-11-08 02:19:52Only thing I had the slightest problem with was you switched from thrid to first. But with the second part you should develop the relationship a bit. The twist was pretty good especially with her name but sort of saw it comming, but i didnt really care as it was a really good story.
