1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-01-20 12:58:04Nice first story! One note, though: a “tong” is a tool for picking things up, unless this IS sci-fi and his “tongue” is really a “tong”.«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-01-20 12:58:04Nice first story! Porn video I’d love to see the story fleshed out to the max. Just enough detail to be able to place the story in almost any genre, be it Sci-fi, horror, or just plain, pure, simple sex. Just enough detail to be able to place the story in almost any genre, be it Sci-fi, horror, or just plain, pure, simple sex. One note, though: a “tong” is a tool for picking things up, unless this IS sci-fi and his “tongue” is really a “tong”.«1» One note, though: a “tong” is a tool for picking things up, unless
