9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… I should know, i’m a writer myself! Pornhat i like it. 9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… Much obliged.ReaderReport 2009-07-05 20:57:52Well, I liked it! I should know, i’m a writer myself! 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-23 23:17:34KEihzv Thank you for your post.Thanks Again. There’s more to life than just sex! To me, it shows u have real potential and actually care about the characters- that’s what a real writer does, even writers like Zane. i like it. 9/10- for grammatical errors…Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-05 18:57:06nice buildup, but NOTHING HAPPENED… cant wait until the next part«123» cant wait until the next part«123»
