I write and sell a few stories. 3 comments«1»aceofhartsReport 2008-10-27 07:55:27Excellent story!!!!! XXX i was definatly captured all the way to the end. Right now you are trying to be clever. The “D” was pure hoke. Don’t be clever until you first become a writer. I also agree with wordytom… I apologize if I insult you, but I feel you have potential. Why not try to tell a straight story that starts at the beginning and stops at the end? The “D” was pure hoke. The “D” was pure hoke. Don’t be clever until you first become a writer. I apologize if I insult you, but I feel you have potential. Don’t be clever until you first become a writer.
