HRWanonymous readerReport 2013-09-06 04:42:30The last comment put it nicely. If you can’t do any better than this then give it up and don’t submit excrement like this anymore!!!!!!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-05 16:36:24Your grammar and spelling need improvement, especially your lack of upper case letters. XXX 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-10 23:37:49You say this is your first story, if you intend to write another, please wait until you graduae from colllege and your major was English, but then learn how to write for about five years, get a group of proofreaders to go over your thoughts, then when a qualified person says for you to attenpt your second story, you may try again, not before PLEASE. Actually this story sucked ass just like the ignorant and I use the loosely (author) who wrote it!!! If you can’t
