The flow and ebb is good and, unlike many of the utterly uncouth stories on this site, you strike a nice blend between fantastical raunchiness and plausible reality. be descriptive. Pornhat some tiny bit of realism would make this better .MoneReport 2009-08-21 19:07:47Very nice… I concur, however, with latino; you should do more to bring out the “latina” qualities. Flow was good, story was believable, and pretty well written. it was a least 5 minutes . reminds me of the sex movies on cinemax . I wish that there was more detail to bring out more of the Latina in her… some tiny bit of realism would make this better .MoneReport 2009-08-21 19:07:47Very nice… Do keep writing.
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