Too bad, too – it was going so well.Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-23 00:24:53Hey, wasn’t gonna write a comment (great story, but I just didn’t think I could contribute meaningful commentary).. Are you serious? XXX I dunno, new to me, but incredibly respectful to your readers 🙂 I’ve got you bookmarked now, and hope to read more stories in the future!Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-15 00:50:58wow thatwas. . . … Are you serious? This grok is par for the course. i couldnt waiT till the end 2 jerk off 8—-D~~«1234» It’s… 18 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-06-05 07:06:498===D~~~(.)(.) gizzzz on bboobbss yeahpappa smurfReport 2009-07-05 17:19:30greatklaxxReport 2009-06-29 01:09:06Shoulda stopped at part 3. Ashz: The LACK of dirty talk? Are you serious? I really wanna say, thank you for not only writing a great story (hot, dirty, and with enough plot that it doesn’t just collapse) but
