1 comments«1»READERReport 2005-02-26 15:09:50Too fucking short, where is your imagination. Pornhat Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. And most of all, why are u fucking an ex-boyfreind? 1 comments«1»READERReport 2005-02-26 15:09:50Too fucking short, where is your imagination. Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. And most of all, why are u fucking an ex-boyfreind? 1 comments«1»READERReport 2005-02-26 15:09:50Too fucking short, where is your imagination. Your story line is ok, but u need to develop and describe in more detail the feeling and actiions. Can’t you find a new one?«1» Your
